Knights of Kaldor: Stray Thoughts

Created by Joe Adams

15 Mar 19

Finished Medtald and looked out at what the future might hold.
15 Feb 10

Pondered the future of the project.
21 Feb 09

Rationalized my absence from writing new material and throw out some ideas about what's coming in the future.
07 Sep 06

Extracted some information on Local Campaigns from the Thonahexus article.
01 Sep 06

Created this page as a place to put some thoughts about WHY or HOW I created the Knights of Kaldor.
Summer 06

Published part of an article on the Knights of Kaldor campaign in Thonahexus 7.
08 Mar 04

Fethael Hundred and the Knights of Kaldor started as a fan project on


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The last one…Finished.

Medtald has been finally completed. I haven't been idle, but have been working mostly on canon projects for Columbia Games. Lots of Orbaal, Larani, books, and fairs have been my forte over the last few years. Plus helping out as a contributor on a number of manors, adventures, and other projects have kept me "in the game."

On the side, I've changed jobs, retired from the Army, moved to a new state, and created a startup. I'm not sure what's coming next. I like the approach of developing a location with an associated adventure. The old Royal Hunting Lodge and the Devil Riders are an easy combination to tackle.

One thing for sure is that I want to keep working on Knights of Kaldor in some way. The story has become Galdyk's and I want to take another look at it from the knights' point of view.

I've played with some short stories based on Gladyk and the knights, so those scribblings might find their way here as well. Who knows?

The last one…I think.

With Blixth’s final publication, I’m left with only Medtald to complete Fethael Hundred. The problem is that I’m lacking the time and motivation to go through the manor creation process one last time.

Medtald was designed to be the bridge into the “Third Act” of the campaign. The Gazetteer set up Medtald with the idea of having a succession problem ala King Lear. I restructured the campaign last year, cutting a lot of the second act out. This leaves Medtald without a theme to center it on. I had a similar, but smaller, problem with Blixth and muscled through.

Medtald is just going to have to wait. I’m not sure what it’s waiting for but I’m sure time and inspiration. Most importantly to me, I’ve got to shift focus and get the campaign up to the point where Medtald is needed for the plot instead of just being filler.

Getting back into gear

It's been a while since I've had the time and inclination to write my own stuff. I'm still having fun writing with Harn Writers' Group but it's nice to return home to Fethael Hundred, so to speak. The last couple of years have flown by. New jobs, more school, bad bosses, new bosses, graduation, and promotion; everything blends together. It's been fun, but I've finally found the time to get back to the manors and adventures that I started over five years ago!

The latest burst of creativity started when I arranged to have lunch with Brian McNeilly in Vancouver. It was a questionable pub for lunch, but the meeting was great and the conversation got me thinking about finishing some of the things I'd started. Elmeze had lain in a state of near completion for years. I'd been toying with the financial model of a tourney knight and, although I still don't have it perfected, the manor and its adventure (which has nothing to do with tournaments) is now ready for release.

Since the original group of playtesters wandered off to Tashal and bigger things, I've been at a loss for how to continue the original Knights of Kaldor campaign. The original plan had been for the knights to ride into the Sorkin Mountains, find the cairn deal with the Agrikans, survive the dragon, and come back as heroes. The trouble was/is that taking the group that far outside of the Hundred shatters the local campaign model that I've worked so hard to build.

So instead of pushing a weak position, I went back to the drawing board. I'm working on a mini-campaign set completely in the Hundred, that started out as a series of events Allan Prewett ran for his group. This series of adventures will use all of the background of Fethael Hundred and could be used as an introductory adventure, set in a campaign timeline before the Letters of Arlin. I hate issuing teasers, but there you are.

What? Another manor in Kaldor?

Yes children, I am going to clean off my desk and release the all of the manors in Fethael Hundred. I started this very ambitious project over Christmas 2003 with some notes on what would become the Knights of Kaldor plot. The Fethael Hundred Gazetteer followed in early 2004. From then until now, scores of emails and phone calls have kept the project rolling along. As a writer, I can tell you that nothing keeps you motivated more than a support group of folks that are interested in what you are doing and are happy to help.

The project has succeeded because of a number of happy coincidences.  I'd come up with a good draft of the FHG and was starting to get into the Getha article when the HarnForum got me linked up with Robert Barfield, an old friend who I hadn't been able to find for years. Robert had just retired and I was able to tap into his wealth of Harn knowledge to make up the macro-plan, especially the economic balance of the Hundred. His views on the Laranian church also helped shape Lethyl Abbey and the chapter houses of Hakstyn and Jenkald.

While Robert and I were figuring out how trade and services flowed around Fethael Hundred, I was tinkering with a Thonahexus article on Building a Manor. I contacted a HarnForum member named George Kelln, who had posted a detailed account on the manpower and time needed to build a manor house. It turned out that George is also a talented map maker and he jumped right in and drew interior and exterior maps.

In addition to the manor articles, I had created an overview of the campaign I called the Knights of Kaldor (KoK). I posted the FHG and the KoK Overview on in March 2004. As a result, another HarnForum denizen, Allan Prewett, contacted me. He had a group of players. I had a campaign. It worked. Allan not only runs the play-test group, he also gives a lot of creative input.

Over the following months there have been many people that have helped keep me going. I can't hope to remember all the names but I thank them for caring enough to write encouraging words and constructive comments.

Local Campaigns

Local campaigns use a small geographic area for the setting. The small geographical scale encourages intimacy, re-use, and continual conflict. The players benefit from living in a fantasy world as opposed to moving through it. They are able to build inter-personal relationships with NPCs through continued interaction. They are also able to create their own characters within the setting's recurring events and more deeply developed locations. All this detail enables a richly interwoven plot without forcing too much information at the players at once. Plot threads lead players from location to location without railroading.

The scenario is built in three layers: strategic, tactical, and personal. Strategic level hooks remind the PCs that the setting is bigger than they are. These are events that the PCs observe from a distance but that impact them from a broad perspective. I developed these hooks from the region's unfolding meta-plot, as described in the HÂRNDEX and canon kingdom modules. I decided to work with the Kaldoric Patriot Movement, friction between the Indamas and the Dariunes, and the vague command relationship between the Order of the Spear of Shattered Sorrow and the Order of the Lady of Paladins.

Tactical level hooks come from the campaign's plot line. These challenges require the group's combined talents to solve or overcome as the players pursue their goals. As vassals of the Sheriff of Neph, the PCs start the campaign pursuing bandits. In addition to their "day job," they find themselves attending the social and religious events that make up the life of a young nobleman. Fighting bandits becomes tougher and tougher, as they are pitted against an organized band of outlaws that have a dark secret.

While the other levels could be crafted, personal level hooks are allowed to emerge from the combination of the character history and the setting. This level uses the detailed setting extensively. For example, the romances that have blossomed between the player characters and local noble women provide motivation for the PCs to seek glory. Another example is the enmity between the player characters and a jealous young knight from a local manor. In both cases, the player characters are bumping into these hooks whenever they have a moment that they're not "saving the world."

Ideally what happens during campaign play is that the player characters are fully engaged with tactical level hooks. Strategic level hooks occur sporadically, bringing new villains and obstacles into the campaign's scope. While personal level hooks fill in the blank spaces between the larger dramatic events. I think the appearance of personal level hooks is the difference between moving through a game setting and living in one. Developmentally, a local campaign is easier to write, as locations in a small region share a lot of characteristics. I approached the creation of the campaign and setting from "the top down." Writing the settings from the "top-down" allowed me to see the effect that one idea might have on the rest of the locations. I started by writing a plot overview (Knights of Kaldor Overview), filling in blanks while writing the setting overview (Fethael Hundred Gazetteer). Next, a hundred-level economic model was constructed. This model helped emphasize the inter-dependency of the manors in the area. The population of Fethael Hundred is small and each manor relies on trade with its neighbors. Once I knew where all of the craftsmen were, I created article shells for each location and adventure. This way I could add to articles as I wrote.

The hardest part in creating a quest campaign is keeping the PCs interested in following the quest through to the end. I've played several linear campaigns where the group got bored and headed off to explore a blank spot on the map. Once the framework had been constructed, I wrote the locations that would feature throughout the campaign. The prologue set the "big hook," provided some background hints, and hinted at the identity of the main villain. After the prologue, I wrote the ending so that events could build toward a point. With the campaign's plot anchored at both ends, I started writing the adventure articles from the beginning, filling in details and foreshadowing clues where needed.

Last Update: 20 Jan 2007